that was excellent! It seems a majority of fics fall short in one of the departments; has a great premise and lousy sex, or great sex and zero plot or buildup. Good thing that THIS has the best of both worlds! You could literally feel the buildup between them throughout the evening (with the help of booze, that always helps) until they hit the suite :3
I hate you for making me let out one of those momentary banshee laughs at work when getting to the 'would you like another comb' bit. But it was SO worth it. Damn, Zuko, you're ripe for parody (and sexings) and don't even know it <3
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Date: 2009-08-13 09:57 pm (UTC)UNF.
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that was excellent! It seems a majority of fics fall short in one of the departments; has a great premise and lousy sex, or great sex and zero plot or buildup. Good thing that THIS has the best of both worlds! You could literally feel the buildup between them throughout the evening (with the help of booze, that always helps) until they hit the suite :3
I hate you for making me let out one of those momentary banshee laughs at work when getting to the 'would you like another comb' bit. But it was SO worth it. Damn, Zuko, you're ripe for parody (and sexings) and don't even know it <3