“…Would you like another comb?” he asked, as she broke into a smile. “There are lots of them, you can have as many as you li—”
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This was great, Misora! I really liked the way Katara and Zuko connected during/after the play, and you made the progression really honest and natural.
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Date: 2009-08-10 11:55 am (UTC)BEST LINE EVER.
This was great, Misora! I really liked the way Katara and Zuko connected during/after the play, and you made the progression really honest and natural.
I hope you win! ♥