I really liked the progression of this! I know some smutfics jump right into the action, but I like the lead up you've written. It's natural and lovely and gives the sex a context.

"Would you like another comb?" OH ZUKO XDDDDDDDDDD

I am so incredibly flattered that you used my manip!! I literally jumped out of my seat and did a happy dance XD I totally don't overreact, what are you talking about? haha

Very nice work! I wish you luck in the Zutarotica contest :) This is a great piece!